Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 24, 2020
Me in 10 years
Hi for writing I was supposed to write a story about what I thought it would be like in ten years when writing this I already had some ideas I really liked making this story because I was thinking about ten years in the future and how it would be like so it was a really fun thing to write.
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hey Alana, you wrote a really good piece of writing for this topic. Have a go at reposting this blog so that we can all read it.
ReplyDeleteI'd love to read this Alana!!!
ReplyDeleteyour awesome at this
ReplyDelete