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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

The pony

                      because of quarantine people can not go to school so they do online classes today was                          my first day of online classes and we were supposed to write about a baseball cap, a       banana, a movie theater and a pony here is my story of those things. Is there anything I can improve?
Do you have a horse? If you do have a horse what gender are they and what color are they?

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 5:57 PM

    Hey Alana,
    Fantastic work on your writing today. When doing your writing try using your 5 senses as it will add more detail and depth to your work.

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  2. AnonymousMay 1, 2020 at 10:06 AM

    Hey Alana, this is Ella. I like how you added your background and added a colour for your text. Maybe next time you could put them into paragraphs and make the story longer. Where did you get these ideas from?

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