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Thursday, April 16, 2020

My Wicked Parents

This is a fictional story my family is actually amazing and my mum as a child actually had a poodle and my da had a dog and a cat as a child

2 comments:

  1. Hi Alana this is Ella, as you know. I love your describing words like green, rainbow, like a green apple and more. Maybe next time you could put your mum on one slide and your dad on another. What was your dads cat's name?

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  2. Hi Alana, Great work on presenting your blog. I love the way you have described your parents. Have a go at now putting these descriptions into a story.

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