Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
My Wicked Parents
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Hi Alana this is Ella, as you know. I love your describing words like green, rainbow, like a green apple and more. Maybe next time you could put your mum on one slide and your dad on another. What was your dads cat's name?
ReplyDeleteHi Alana, Great work on presenting your blog. I love the way you have described your parents. Have a go at now putting these descriptions into a story.
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