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Friday, August 21, 2020

Hi in my literacy group we are doing instructional and persuasive writing I decided to write about how to make chocolate cupcakes

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  1. hi i really like your info on making cupcakes i might make some

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  2. Kia ora Alana
    Wow, what a very thorough and detailed post you have done. It's making me hungry too! Did your cupcakes turn out well when you made them? Where did you find this awesome recipe? Keep up the great work!

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  3. hi Alana they all look so Delicious You were right you did spectacular baking! TANIWHA HOPA!!

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  4. Hi Alana, I am Ahlia from the Toroa hub. I really liked your post on cupcakes, I liked how you made the writing very clear and how you put the ingredients and baking supplies in different catogories. Your post reminded me when I did baking with my family last holidays. Maybe next time you could say how they turned out when you made the cupcakes but other than that your post was great.

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