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Friday, September 11, 2020

 

Hi my name is Alana at the beginning of each of my literacy lesson we have to write a short story about a picture my teacher chooses this was the picture she chose and this is what I wrote. I really liked this piece of writing hope you liked it to tell me what you think. 😁

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  1. AnonymousOctober 23, 2020 at 9:54 AM

    Hi Alana this piece of writing is really awesome a I like the adjectives that you used in it.

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