Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 7, 2021
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Alana, this is Ahlia from the Toroa hub. I really like how colourful and eye catching your artwork is. Maybe next time you could put the name of the mountain and river you choose to draw but other than that it is great.
ReplyDeleteHi Alana it's Anya here I really like how it's so colourful but maybe next time you could cover up the white bits but everything else is amazing. You could become and famous artist one day good job Alana bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Anya, thank you for this comment and the feedback you gave me on my art, next time I do something like this I'll be sure to think about this comment and how I should cover up any white bits on my art :)
DeleteHi alana I really liked your pepeha art I like how colourful it is and also I like the mountains. Mabey next time you could add some clouds Great job. Tori
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