Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 12, 2020
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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nice alana
ReplyDeleteKia ora Alana, I really like how you have added lots of detail about your story "The Driver". The book is really cool and I defiantly think little kids will want to read it. Maybe next time you could add a bit of an explanation on why you did this.`Overall I really liked how you have written it and I really would like to see more of your blog posts in the future.
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